I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
hello Patrick this is Ila and I would like to say that I like your work you have done is really nice and interesting and it tells me a lot about the wall of china.
Hi Patrick. This is me Jasmine i really like your wallpaper on slide 1 and i like how you and Faafua were talking about the Great wall of china i really like the video's about the great wall of china. Bye have a good Holiday and Christmas
Hi Patrick I so enjoyed reading your information slides on the Great wall of China - one of the wonders of the world. Good work. I will be looking forward to reading your blog posts over the holidays. Ka Pai.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
hello Patrick this is Ila and I would like to say that I like your work you have done is really nice and interesting and it tells me a lot about the wall of china.
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DeleteHi Patrick great work on this peice of work really enjoyed working with you hope we work together on another piece of work. :)
ReplyDeletethank you the comments is good
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ReplyDeleteThis is me Jasmine i really like your wallpaper on slide 1 and i like how you and Faafua were talking about the Great wall of china i really like the video's about the great wall of china.
Bye have a good Holiday and Christmas
Hi Patrick
ReplyDeleteI so enjoyed reading your information slides on the Great wall of China - one of the wonders of the world. Good work. I will be looking forward to reading your blog posts over the holidays. Ka Pai.
thank you. you have a good day
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