I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Patrick
ReplyDeleteyour passion project about dragons was so fun to read
I want to ask you a question does dragons still exist
Hi Patrick this is Ila and Kaiva we really like your topic that you picked we really like your work it is nice and cool bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Patrick this is Neha. I like what you and Aryan have done for your project because dragons are really cool to learn about. Keep working hard.
ReplyDeleteHi Patrick its Aryan your Passion Project bud and I really like that we work hard have I good day bye.
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