I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Patrick, Awesome sharing of what you learned from this video. Totally agree with what you have written. We all need to be more kind in life. So true. Hey Patrick, make sure you proofread your writing. Some of your sentences have errors in them. Keep up the awesome sharing of your learning on your blog.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Patrick,
ReplyDeleteAwesome sharing of what you learned from this video. Totally agree with what you have written. We all need to be more kind in life. So true.
Hey Patrick, make sure you proofread your writing. Some of your sentences have errors in them. Keep up the awesome sharing of your learning on your blog.
thank you
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