I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Patrick I really like the speech it got's a lot of info on Sir Edmund Hillary great work keep up the hard work.
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ReplyDeleteI'm Jimmy your class mate and I like your speech keep up the great work and awesome work.
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ReplyDeletePatrick this is Faafua
This speach is so cool when you spoke your speach you were so confident nice work. :)
Thank you Faafua
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ReplyDeletePatrick this is Aryan
This speech is so good when you spoke your speech you were so confident nice work.
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