I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Patrick its Lie from RM2 you did a great job doing your work and this is inspring. I know why Jacinda Arden is a hero. It looks like your going to be a hero. Have a good day!
Hello Patrick, Good job on sharing your work on your blog. But make sure when its a name or last name there a capital letter on the first letter of her name. But I like why you said it specifically, well done. My advice is to make sure all of your "i's" are capital I because you always do a capital I when you're just saying I in general. Before posting on your blog you should check if everything make sense and that you proofread. But overall your work was fantastic. -Ema From Room Eleven
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Patrick,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your work on your blog. Like you I really like Jacinda Ardern as well.
Kia ora Patrick its Lie from RM2 you did a great job doing your work and this is inspring. I know why Jacinda Arden is a hero. It looks like your going to be a hero.
ReplyDeleteHave a good day!
Hello Patrick,
ReplyDeleteGood job on sharing your work on your blog. But make sure when its a name or last name there a capital letter on the first letter of her name. But I like why you said it specifically, well done.
My advice is to make sure all of your "i's" are capital I because you always do a capital I when you're just saying I in general. Before posting on your blog you should check if everything make sense and that you proofread. But overall your work was fantastic.
-Ema From Room Eleven