I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Patrick, Great start with your imaginary story. You do need to proofread Patrick and make sure the sentences you have written make sense and that you have used punctuation correctly. I will help you with your writing in class.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Patrick,
ReplyDeleteGreat start with your imaginary story. You do need to proofread Patrick and make sure the sentences you have written make sense and that you have used punctuation correctly.
I will help you with your writing in class.