I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 14 August 2020
Faafua,Ila and Patrick Week 4 and 5 Argumenation Writing
Hi Patrick, Faafua and Ila its me Lie your best friend. I understand your work and I like how you said those words. You guys are doing are really doing it and your getting smarter. I don't know how you did these kind of stuff. This is really cool and Patrick bye you did amazing. I miss you bye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Patrick, Faafua and Ila its me Lie your best friend. I understand your work and I like how you said those words. You guys are doing are really doing it and your getting smarter. I don't know how you did these kind of stuff. This is really cool and Patrick bye you did amazing. I miss you bye!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Patrick, My name is Sione from EHS, i like how you coloured the background and it looks super amazing!.Ka kite.Have a good weekend.
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