I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Patrick WE are Ben and Tuamelie We liked How you edit Your Work and We Liked Your Favorite Things and Ben liked How you Liked Rugby And Me and Ben Likes How you done your Work
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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ReplyDeleteHello my name is Tiannah i read your poster and it was awesome and creative!
ReplyDeleteMy sister Trinity, Treyden and Teegan likes rainbows end too!!
Hi Patrick,
ReplyDeleteThe cake cake on your poster looks yummy doesn't it? I really like your poster.
Kind regards
Iris
KIA Ora my name is Ziggy I enjoyed your pictures of rugby.
ReplyDeleteDid you think about what your gonna do next?.
When did you do this?.
Hello Patrick WE are Ben and Tuamelie We liked How you edit Your Work and We Liked Your Favorite Things and Ben liked How you Liked Rugby And Me and Ben Likes How you done your Work
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