I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Patrick, thank you for sharing your descriptive writing. I like how you used what you could see, hear and feel to show what is in the picture. Can you think of any synonyms (words that mean the same) for "nice"?
Hello Patch, Great descriptive writing. Keep up the good work see you tomorrow well maybe not because cap see you next week wait you might be sick see you next thursday :)
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Patrick, thank you for sharing your descriptive writing. I like how you used what you could see, hear and feel to show what is in the picture. Can you think of any synonyms (words that mean the same) for "nice"?
ReplyDeleteHello Patch, Great descriptive writing. Keep up the good work see you tomorrow well maybe not because cap see you next week wait you might be sick see you next thursday :)
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