I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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The Halloween house
Characters Fua Patrick Ila jack andy and a killer
Where In spooky house
When 2020
What Halloween
The Halloween house
In 2020 31 of October me and my friends were going trick or treating. Their names were Fua Patrick and Ila. We were going home because we went to many houses but then we saw a house. We have never seen in our lives Ila told us we should go in the house for candy we all agreed. when we got there it was so dark I knock on the door but none came so I was going until I heard a scream
We went inside because there was someone there when we got inside it looked so big but from the outside it was little we looked and looked but there was none then we were about to give up but the there was a man he was running to us I did not move but then Fua pull me we got to the basement and then there was a girl and a boy trapped I ask what there names where they said that their names were jack and andy we got them out then we ran outside but when we were at the door it was the same man. he had a gun this time and shot the girl and boy I was so angry I kick him and then I shot him but he did not died then he got the gun and shot all of us news report there were 3 kids shot dead in a house none knows who it is but be carefully he is still on loose.