Tuesday, 20 October 2020

The Halloween house

Characters Fua Patrick Ila jack andy and a killer

Where In spooky house

When 2020

What Halloween






The Halloween house

 

In 2020 31 of October me and my friends were going trick or treating. Their names were Fua Patrick and Ila. We were going home because we went to many houses but then we saw a house. We have never seen in our lives Ila told us we should go in the house for candy we all agreed. when we got there it was so dark I knock on the door but none came so I was going until I heard a scream



We went inside because there was someone there when we got inside it looked so big but from the outside it was little we looked and looked but there was none then we were about to give up but the there was a man he was running to us I did not move but then Fua pull me we got to the basement and then there was a girl and a boy trapped I ask what there names where they said that their names were jack and andy we got them out then we ran outside but when we were at the door it was the same man. he had a gun this time and shot the girl and boy I was so angry I kick him and then I shot him but he did not died then he got the gun and shot all of us news report there were 3 kids shot dead in a house none knows who it is but be carefully he is still on loose.




 

2 comments:

  1. Hello Patrick I am Mahana from your class I like your story with A killer and your friends that must be scary going into a old house and I hope you guys got out before he or she got you and Why did you guys wanted to go into the house in the first place and keep up the work :D

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    1. thank you i hope you keep up the work too well have a good day thank you for you kindness bye

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