I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
It’s great to see you’re giving more activities a go. Your Lorde post looks great, I like the colours you’ve chosen and the image you’ve selected. What else did you find out about her that was unexpected or interesting? That's awesome you like singing, I do sometimes but get nervous if others listen.
I’m really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Kia ora Patrick, My name is Sione from EHS. I like the way how you pick the pic about Lorde, They look so cool. Ka kite. Have a good weekend and I hope you like this comment :).
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Patrick,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
It’s great to see you’re giving more activities a go. Your Lorde post looks great, I like the colours you’ve chosen and the image you’ve selected. What else did you find out about her that was unexpected or interesting? That's awesome you like singing, I do sometimes but get nervous if others listen.
I’m really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel
Kia ora Patrick, My name is Sione from EHS. I like the way how you pick the pic about Lorde, They look so cool. Ka kite. Have a good weekend and I hope you like this comment :).
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