I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka pai, good work on your ghost story Patrick! I like how you had a clear problem and outcome, and how you thought about making the design of your book go with the mood of your story. If you had those powers that your character has at the end, what would you do with them?
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Ka pai, good work on your ghost story Patrick! I like how you had a clear problem and outcome, and how you thought about making the design of your book go with the mood of your story. If you had those powers that your character has at the end, what would you do with them?
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